Tintin fanfiction - The Crab with the Mechanical Claws (part 6/12)

[winryweiss]

Originally a fill for this prompt at Tintin kink meme.


If interested, you can find an updated and thorough rewrite of this story on AO3.

Comments

[unicorn1980]

*big grin*

This gets more and more interesting. I am really enjoying their adventure. The steamy scene is an extra bonus for me, lol. Mmm, it was very nice. The Captain's intense gaze, of course Tintin couldn't resist kissing him. But you're right, it is just like Tintin to be thinking of solving the case, even when he is enjoying being ravished by Captain XD

Oooh, what awaits them in Malbork? More please <3

[winryweiss]

Hmmm, good. ^^ I was little worried whether I didn't rushed the things between them with the steamy scene. But it seems that I made it right and in proper place. ^^

[unicorn1980]

Well, I admit I was surprised it happened so soon, but in a good way! They were instantly attracted to each other, that was obvious, and they are both testosterone fuelled men, so why not seize the moment? I'm glad you wrote it and looking forward to seeing what happens next (between them, and the mystery) ;)

<3

[winryweiss]

You know, constant (even if subtle) hitting on the other during a sailing to Calais made wonders. :D And the fact, that they were on small ship wihtout anything other to do didn't help them either. *evil grin*
Plus, the idea of workaholic Tintin who would stop in the middle of foreplay, because adventure calls, and Captain totally WTF from it, oh that was simple must. ^^

[unicorn1980]

the idea of workaholic Tintin who would stop in the middle of foreplay, because adventure calls, and Captain totally WTF from it, oh that was simple must.

absolutely, hehe. It's so him :D

[unicorn1980]

I forgot to mention how much I am enjoying the Thom(p)sons in this fic! There are hardly any fics about Thompson and Thomson. Their scene with the phone made me giggle. Thompsons need more love around here, they are funny, sweet characters <3

[winryweiss]

To be honest, Thom(p)sons did surprised me, since they are unexpectedly funny to write. When I'm plotting their parts, I'm giggling aloud. ^^ So many acrobatic possibilities.

Yes, most fics center on Tintin and Captain. Well, we are yaoi/slash fangirls, I do not need to say more. :D Sadly, most of supporting characters (and sometimes even Snowy) are omitted. That is not fair, 'cause thanks to them the 'Adventures' felt so alive for me.